Don’t let the urge to explain ruin your novel.Writers have trust issues sometimes. We worry whether or not our readers will get what we're trying to do. Will they spot that oh-so-subtle hint in chapter three? Will they get the subtext between the romantic leads in scene five? Is the protagonist’s backstory clear or should we throw in a flashback that explains it?We worry so much readers might miss something, we end up shoving the story right down their throats.And that's bad.

Explaining a novel is not the same as telling a story.For one thing, it frequently leads to bad writing, because we're explaining what happens, we’re not dramatizing a scene as it unfolds. For another, it robs readers of the chance to discover the story and connect to it on their own level. They’re not given the opportunity to make their own choices and decisions about the characters and story and what it means to them.Have you ever heard someone try to explain why a joke was funny? Same concept.Here are four reasons to resist the urge to explain in your novel:

1. The whole “tell me a story” thing is overrated.Any time we explain, we’re stopping the story make sure readers understand something about the scene or characters. The more we explain, the more outside the story we tend to get, and the more likely it is that those explanations will turn into infodumps and told prose.For example:

The supplies Karl promised them weren’t there. The storage facility Karl had told them about was supposed to be filled with vital, lifesaving supplies like food, bandages, gasoline, and other essential items they’d need to survive the zombie-filled world they we’re now living in. If they didn’t have the supplies, they were going to have to risk their lives by going into the abandoned houses and shops along the highway in order to find food and medicine. Houses and shops that were filled with hungry zombies that would try to eat them. Bob got so angry about the lie that he considered punching Karl in the face.Bob shouted at Karl, “How could you lie to us? We need those food and medical supplies to survive!”Karl tried to get out of it by lying some more, so Bob threatened to shoot him. This terrified Karl so much he gave up and said he’d lied because he knew if he hadn’t, Bob would never have taken him along and he’d have died on the road. Bob was still angry, but he decided not to shoot Karl.

Doesn’t this read more like a summary of a scene than part of a novel? Do you feel Bob’s anger? Get a sense of how bad this is for him and his friendsThe repeated information is also annoying—readers are going to know what “vital lifesaving supplies” are, and they don’t need to be told that three different ways. It’s also explaining what’s going to happen next, which makes the scene feel stale and kills any mystery.Compare this with a scene that shows the situation and leaves enough for readers to anticipate and wonder about:

The storage unit was empty.Bob turned to Karl, standing back by the road, away from the others. “You lied to us?”“No, they were there, I swear.”Sure they were. “Well, they’re not here now, Karl. The door wasn’t even locked!” What a nightmare. What did they have left in the truck? Two, maybe three days of food if they rationed?Karl ran a hand over his mouth and shrugged. “Maybe someone beat us to it?”Not likely. No one had been here in a long time, and his gut told him there’d never been any supplies in that unit. He drew his pistol and cocked it. “Let’s try this again.”This is just a snippet of what’s covered in the explained sample, but already it’s more interesting and there’s a better sense of a story unfolding.We’re not told why the characters are doing what they’re doing, we see them do it. We aren’t told Karl’s motives; we’ll see them in a few lines after Bob scares him into talking…or will he? Maybe Karl talks himself out of this and never reveals his cowardice. Maybe Bob shoots him. The resolution to this conflict is uncertain, because we’re seeing it unfold, and that uncertainty draws us in.The more you explain, the more likely you’ll infodump and keep readers at a distance.(Here’s more on The Power of Explanation Compels You: Avoiding the Dreaded Infodump)

2. It ruins all the fun for the scene.When we explain that Karl lied because he didn’t want to be left behind, there’s no mystery left about why he lied, or what his real motives might be. He’s just some poor guy trying to survive, not a potential threat.It also sums up all the action in a few paragraphs, so the problem is over before readers get a chance to worry about what it all means.Tension and suspense happen over time. The story needs that time to create the worry and anticipate what’s to come. Telling readers everything up front leaves them nothing to worry about. The fun is in wondering what Karl might be up to, not in knowing why he lied the moment he’s caught doing it.Over-explaining robs you of the ability to create tension and suspense and hook your readers.

3. It invalidates the very reason readers read.The first example sums up everything we need to know for probably several chapters. We know where the story is going—a lot of scenes of Bob and the gang sneaking through houses and shops looking for supplies and running into zombies.While these upcoming scenes might be entertaining, explaining what’s coming suggests they won’t be any different from the scenes that got us here. It is a zombie apocalypse novel, after all. And without any reason for the storage unit scene to be there (since it was resolved immediately), there's little reason to think it has any greater meaning in the book, either.But if we look at the same upcoming scenes from the perspective of the second example—not knowing Karl’s motives for lying, or even knowing for sure that he did lie, can make those house-searching scenes more interesting. Can Karl be trusted? Is there someone else out there that Bob and the gang need to worry about? What might they find while looking for more supplies? Why did they really make this stop at the storage unit?Instead of the lack of supplies being a small bump in the plot road, it becomes something more—maybe it’s there because Bob and the gang need to encounter something in those abandoned houses. This plot device is how the author gets Bob into places he’s smart enough not to go into. If so, then there must be something cool coming up. Readers can see there's more here than just an empty storage unit.If there’s no compelling reason for readers to keep reading, they won’t.

4. It doesn’t get readers in the feels.

No one is going to care about Bob or Karl in the first example, because they’re not characters, they’re just names. There’s no sense of being in their heads or seeing their struggles to survive in this zombie world. The motives are stated, but so what? Scared guy in a zombie world, big deal. There's nothing that makes Karl anything more than a cliche.Had I written out example two further, we’d have seen more from these characters. I’d have shown Karl terrified and begging for his life, probably lying some more to keep from getting shot.I’d have thought about his motives and how that would have affected his actions. I’d have added the clues that maybe he was lying, but also leave doubt that maybe he really did think the supplies were there. I'd have added layers to him so he was a person in a tough situation trying to do what he needed to survive.Bob would have been further explored as well. We’d have seen him struggling over what to do about Karl. Leaving him behind would be a death sentence, and shooting him would be kinder. But that’s murder, and Bob is still a good guy at heart. He’s not going to throw aside another human being like that.But taking Karl with them is a bad idea, since he's given Bob lots of reasons not to trust him. Is he just a scared liar or in he something more sinister?Seeing the characters in action is how readers get to know them. It makes readers care about them, and helps them connect on an emotional level.Readers don’t have the advantage of being inside the author’s head. They don’t know every aspect of the characters and what everything means, or why a small gesture is important.And you know what? They don’t want to know. They want to watch the character, get to know them, and figure all that out for themselves.We don’t want to prevent readers from connecting to the characters and story.Readers are smart folks who love books. They've been around the literary block once or twice, and they pick up on the subtle tricks of our trade. They get the subtext, they notice the clues, and they understand the layers and complexities of our characters. We don’t need to explain it all to them.

Trust your reader. Trust your story.The urge to explain can be hard to overcome, but next time you think readers won't get it unless you spell it out for them—resist. Trust that they will understand what you’re saying, that you have done enough, and that the clues aren't as obscure as you think they are. Because odds are, they will, you have, and they aren't. Believe in your words and the readers of those words.Figuring out the story is a lot more fun than having that story explained.EXERCISE FOR YOU: Here’s a trick for finding infodumps and passages of explained text: Zoom out on the pages of your document (a program such as Word, that shows multiple pages on the screen works best) and look for large blocks of gray text. Those are the places without dialogue, and the most likely places to find infodumps, explanation, or even heavy descriptive passages.

Have you ever struggled with the urge to explain? Have you read books that didn’t hold back and explained way too much?